Fanopeion's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sick Boy]

For what punk is, I enjoy this.
:)

GraniteOverworld responds:

Heh, I only labeled it as punk cause basically none of the other tags describe this properly. Glad yuh like it ^_^

[2-bits: Alpha and Beta]

This tune is very interesting, especially when you first hear the chord progression in the beginning.
The swelling effect (overall) used for the build up was quite fitting and just tangible enough.

I will avert my ears from (what I feel to be) occasional clutter given that you're working with 8/16 bit but I find the crash sound (drums - cymbal) to be a bit flawed.

All in all a nice piece :)
8.5/10

[Mondsichel]

Very nice.

The only thing that bothered me (this is nitpicking on my part) is that when you introduced the Spiccato (violin? or was it cello?) is that it felt 10% too loud, but after about 3-4 bars it blends perfectly. As I said, nitpicking :)
10/10

[Rusted Wonderland]

First impression of this song is pretty nice.

The development of the song advances quite comfortably for the first two minutes, then it slows down considerably. I really can't get it out of my mind that the same chord progression is clearly heard throughout the piece and it makes me feel like there is a chapter missing.
8/10

SiegWin responds:

Sorry I've been trying to work out this problem for a while
my melodies tend to repeat too much
thanks for the insight though

[Tribal]

I'd like to pride myself in thinking that I've correctly spotted the VST package you're using. Nexus? Is that correct? Ahaha, nevermind.

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I think that the melody you're using is just too uneventful to be used as a main (on its own) during the first 2 minutes, and again to the end after the small break. The progression of the song is also quite confusing. The buildup is done in such small steps of variety that the song looses any potential definitive makeup. The loss of individuality within the song structure is also accomplished somewhat by the loss of low-range rhythmic properties that could be established, for example, with a more characteristic bass-line.
In essence, the song lacks character.

I hope you find this review to be fair :)

Vasek responds:

Thanks for opinion, i realized same thing. I'm doing my best on the way of changing it and making my songs more complex. Step by step i'm also trying to stimulate my music imagination.
Anyway, thanks for review, it's very helpful!